Val Bowen has been a member of the Read to write poetry group for a number of years, she enjoys creating watercolour art and amazing drawings, but is sometimes reluctant to recognise the quality of he poetry. It has taken some persuasion to persuade her to join the fellowship of the Sixty Odd, but her writing speaks for itself as a testament to her creative ability.
Poems
Catlike
I yawn, I stretch awake, investigate a sudden twitch, habitually scratch my ear, rub spittle round my face. Enough for now. A quick scout for any others prowling near. I must be sure to move away when dark comes to some fresher ground, a secret place I’ll discover. The bowl and I stare emptily at each other. My hunger says it‘s later than it should be. Two things are very clear. One. They have forgotten me. Two. I must fetch them here. I head for the quiet where they rest, raise my paws to peer at the long creature’s face, then look aside for a landing spot, leap carefully into the space, tiptoe to and fro, stop, start to play, purr loudly a lot, stay patient, toy with laying down, if all else fails claw and/or sneeze. They know to keep to my routine. I know how to please. <<<
To Africa And Back
The watercolour wings, perceived as far too frail to cross the ocean width, in millions take flight like thrown confetti hails and ride the wind . A merest gram of common Painted Lady weight descends to bask and contemplate in warmth revived, another continent. She sets her wing heart course to where the nettles and the thistles thrive. Her larvae yet to come will all be undeterred along the way, by any passing shadow whims, will shelter from the darkening skies, will learn where tongues unfurl will sense a pulse unheard, an urge to fly, that beats them here, to Africa and back. <<<
Coach Trip to Whitby
If it wasn’t for the yellow Rape
the fields would fully dissipate
to white washed, eerie , soft.
The trees are huddled
in a flock or stand alone
and pressed with no horizon left
to separate the earth and sky.
Mother Die has let loose
Umbel froth across the green.
I could stay and lose myself in this.
But loved ones, long since
disappeared into the mist,
are urging me Get Up!
Get Up! Somehow
I find the strength
to carry on
to lift my legs
to place them by the bed
and stand.
I will travel narrow roads ahead
remember how the verges pushed
the all encompassing aside,
hold on to find the absent sun
and say I tried.
<<<
Intercession
Along your grain I feel my contour flow colours emanate streak and blend into the magnitude that never ends We commune, align as one, are sanctified certain of our place pure. And I would break bough first just to remain I will watch the clootie cloth I pressed against my chest and tied in offering, disperse to wind and earth and nothingness to free me from my pain <<<
Lorca’s Rose
I wake and scorn the gold ceiling of day, so worthless to me. I stay within my window panes of almost sleep, surrender to the dancing scenes and shudder at his stamping feet The circling beams of heat and light that peep repressed behind the slight of blind , tell me it’s after noon. And only then I pray. And only to the Moon Selene, ride. I wait like Endymion waits for you, in his repose. Return to cloak me in your purest white so I may lay before his feet tonight, my confession of a rose <<<
Sunlit
The cure all azure blue illuminates your branches hacked for winter walking sticks now suddenly shot through with perfumed white abundance as delicate as tracery of lace. Is it the weight of all your flowers that gently tip the sunlit hours into over brimming this first day when you appear in a bouquet lovingly tied with bee clamour ? <<<
Thank you Val and Thank you Mike for twisting her arm just enough. What a celebration of what to me, is real poetry. No under or overtones - though subtle with imagery; no resort to cathartic misery - just the pure joy of verse.
If I were to go all Craig Revel-Horwood on it, and it's maybe because I haven't grasped the flow, some of the line breaks seemed misplaced. Like in Africa
'perceived as too frail
to cross the ocean' - that sort of thing.
And in Sunlit, I'd hyphenate cure-all so the reader understood (or again, am I the eejit who diddle understood?) the meaning.
Intercession and Lorca's Rose, I'm still trying to get - Lorca is guessable, though I don't read him. Intercession I though 'rainbow', but I'll get there. Best Sunday read of 60 Odd for me, ever.